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Years have gone by,
Only wondering what you think.
Understand that I need you.
Regretting every foolish mistake -
Someting I want to forget.

For now  hope you forgive me.
Open your heart for the final time.
Remember what your destiny has
Etenally predicted in your future.
Various hardships burden me;
Endlessly swallowing me into darkness. Just
Rending me of the past

Asking you something personal although,
No kind of answer comes back.
Definitely - I am cursed for life.

ALWAYS - I wanna be by your side;
Loving you from a distance
Wondering whether my love will be returned.
Apprehensive because of your reply.
Yours forever and always
Some words I want to flow to our ears.
©2008-2009 ~TiaAvalon-chan2008
:icontiaavalon-chan2008:

Author's Comments

I don't know why I typed this up... O.o

I suppose my inspiration is the way that I want to tell the guy that I like, how I really feel about him.

All constructive comments are appriciated!! :)
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It could also be used by Rocket in Season 2 of Galactik Football [in a sense of the poem] XD

[See if you can find any hidden messages]

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:icontia-number-4:
great poem !!! I love it
:iconshadow040:
This guy you like is so lucky ;P
It appears you stoled my way of hiding a message ;) 10/10

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98% of the teenage population on dA have 98% in their siggy. If you're one of the - OH WAIT.
:iconsweet-tikal:
Wow impressive poem =D I really hope this guy you love notices how you fee about him :heart:

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I love Sinedd. He is mine hehe. So stay away from him!!! * evil glare *

:love: SineddxTikal Forever! :love: :glomp: :hug:

I like most of the popular Naruto couples. I don't really have a favorite.

Please take a look at my gallery :gallery:
:icontiaavalon-chan2008:
yeah that was a little of my inspiration!! :blush:

i liked the way you did that so i thought i'd steal it!! *mwahahahaha* **coughs**

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"The melody, as beautiful as your eyes
echoes both in and out of my mind.

Music is my reason for life,
Kinzie is the name of my song."


Siempre estoy pensando en ti, no asunto lo mucho que intento terminar.
:icontiaavalon-chan2008:
thank-you!!! :hugs:

i wonder if he'll read this.... actually... only the poem!! XD

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"The melody, as beautiful as your eyes
echoes both in and out of my mind.

Music is my reason for life,
Kinzie is the name of my song."


Siempre estoy pensando en ti, no asunto lo mucho que intento terminar.
:icontiaavalon-chan2008:
thanks tia-number-4 -chan!! *regains breath*

<.< your name is a mouthful. i'm not much of a poet

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"The melody, as beautiful as your eyes
echoes both in and out of my mind.

Music is my reason for life,
Kinzie is the name of my song."


Siempre estoy pensando en ti, no asunto lo mucho que intento terminar.
:iconnemos-star:
Das ist ziemlich gut. x3 Ich mag es. Du musst mehr schreiben!

[[Yeah, it's in German. XD I was feeling random.]]
:iconsweet-tikal:
Haha I hope so for you =D

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I love Sinedd. He is mine hehe. So stay away from him!!! * evil glare *

:love: SineddxTikal Forever! :love: :glomp: :hug:

I like most of the popular Naruto couples. I don't really have a favorite.

Please take a look at my gallery :gallery:
:icontiaavalon-chan2008:
What does it mean?!?!?

Remember i don't study German!! *sweatdrops*

--
"The melody, as beautiful as your eyes
echoes both in and out of my mind.

Music is my reason for life,
Kinzie is the name of my song."


Siempre estoy pensando en ti, no asunto lo mucho que intento terminar.

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